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Rhyme Scheme = AABB different from all other poems
6 4 line stanzas
Enjambment = we day clear stalks balks tits it's unload owed back wake
Last line always shorter in stanza - makes the words in it more pronounced
Anticipation
Clear message
Not too vulgar
The new form makes me read it more because when it's jumbled I lost some key words

14 commas, 6 periods, 2 semicolons, 1 colon, 2 exclamation points.
Some rhyme: day/say, clear/near, waste/haste, stalks/balks, prinked/distinct, past/last, unload/owed, long/wrong, wake/break
Assonance
Nautical motif
Death
s sounds, b sounds, w sounds
We/she/they
Description of boat

Emotion-
- Reflective
- Regret
- Expectancy --> dissapointment
- Hope
- Anger
- Anticipation
- "something always approaching"
- seems slow
- waiting
- it's gone as soon as it's here
- nothing lasts forever
- death is the only thing that's final
- Mockery/Stupidity